Hollan's format for the paper (25%):

Introduction (5 points):

    Motivate

    Background info

    Brief description of centextual design

Methods (10):

    How you did what yo did

    Describe contextual interviews and observations

    Goals is to allow others to duplicate

Results (10):

    Report the results

    Models

    Describe and point out significant results

Design Changes (10):

    What they are

    How tied to data

        Prototypes:

            Recursive treatment of methods and results

            Tiffany says we should say how we would prototype

Discussion:

    Summarize Significant findings

    and

    Design recommendations

    What to do next

Overall Clairity (10)...I think the discussion is clumped into these points.